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Thursday, March 5, 2009
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A young girl, trapped inside a washing machine at a local laundromat yesterday evening is going to okay, Rockland Police said.
This incident happened when two sisters were innocently playing. The 3-year-old climbed inside, and her 7-year-old sister had shut the door. An automatic locking mechanism on the machine had caused the child no way to escape. Police Chief, Ralph Robinson said, the girl was trapped inside for 5 minutes while water was filling the machine. The girls were in care of their aunt had not noticed until the door was locked and the water was flowing in. She pulled aside a citizen that was on his way to the grocery store, he went to his car, got his tools and smashed the glass that allowed the child to escape. She is listed from the hospital in good condition.
This incident happened when two sisters were innocently playing. The 3-year-old climbed inside, and her 7-year-old sister had shut the door. An automatic locking mechanism on the machine had caused the child no way to escape. Police Chief, Ralph Robinson said, the girl was trapped inside for 5 minutes while water was filling the machine. The girls were in care of their aunt had not noticed until the door was locked and the water was flowing in. She pulled aside a citizen that was on his way to the grocery store, he went to his car, got his tools and smashed the glass that allowed the child to escape. She is listed from the hospital in good condition.
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