Thursday, February 26, 2009

Lede Post #2

#4) A bill to be passed by Maryland legislation to prevent identity theft is being reviewed by officials.

#5) At-risk students may find no more troubles after the distribution of federal grant money throughout the Maryland school system.

2 comments:

  1. I see you're putting into practice what we've talked about in class: one sentence, short ledes that are SVO. Nice work! I think #5 is the best one here, but it could be even better if it told us the specifics of how much money was coming to us on the local level. Take a stab at that one.

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